Main paragraph

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Lesson Abstract

Strucutre of Main paragraph

4 paragraph essay 2 main body paragraphs 5 sentences in each 90 to 100 words each Lesson introduction

[!NOTE] 2 methods for doing a plan Ideas,vocabulary,planning

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Firstly,Secondly,Finally adv/disadvantages,prob/solution Idea,Explain,Example idea/reason/opinion

Firstly,Secondly,Finally

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You need three individual points

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Do a three min plan about disagreement

The high school student often immersed in magnificent stress of College entrance examination The work should be assigned to relevant staff,who will be more professional and efficient Teenagers loss no motivation for that 5 sentence:

[!NOTE] There are several reasons why i would argue against having compulsory community service for secondary school students. Firstly,the school curriculum is already full with important academic subjects,such as maths,science and languages.For example,I remember having an extremely busy timetable when I was at high school,and it would not have been possible to add to it.Secondly,students'performance in other subjects would be affected if valuable study time were taken by charity work or neighbourhood improvement schemes. Finally,I believe that teenage students would be reluctant to take part in any programme of obligatory work,and this could lead to poor motivation and even bad behaviour.

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Linking words don't help your vocabulary score Theme vocabulary is helpful to your score

Idea,Explain,Example

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You need three sociated points

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Do a three min plan about supporting voluntary part instead of compulsory part

volutary community service is positive Students more motivated if they can choose gain work experience,self confidence,skills 5 sentence:

[!info] On the other hand,the opportunity to do voluntary community service could be extremely positive for high school students.By making these programmes optional,schools would ensure that only motivated students took part.These young people would gain valuable experience in an adult working environment,which could help to build their self confidence and enhance their skills.Having such experience and skills on their CVs could greatly improve school leavers'career prospects.For example,a period of voluntary work experience might impress a university admissions officer or a future employer.

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Conclusion

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2 easy ‘rules’

never write anything new One sentence: repeat summarise Paraphrasing to show varable word Lesson introduction

Paraphrase the answer that you gave in your introduction

How to write

Example 1 Using high level vocabulary

Introduction It is true that video surveillance has become commonplace in many cities in recent years.While I understand that critics may see this as an invasion of privacy,I believe that there are more benefits than drawbacks.

Conclusion In conclusion,I would argue that the advantages of using video security systems in public places do outweigh the disadvantages.

Example 2 disagree = don't believe

Introduction Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes.Personally,I completely disagree with this view.

Conclusion In conclusion,I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for people who choose private education.

Example 3

Introduction It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before.Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend,societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems.

Conclusion In conclusion,various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.